With our section class, we saw a play, "The Time machine". This is my critic of the play:

The play "The time machine" is a good paly.But any play is perfect, It can always be better .This one has a critic too.

The scenes were in general good and accord to the plot. There were songs and special effects and I gotta say that they  were really good. Something that could be better were the fights.They didn't look  real.  But in general the play was realy nice.

The songs of the play were funy and catchy.They were a little bit silly but they were good. They cath the audition atention.

The special effects were just great.There was a nice light play and I gotta say that it was the best aspect of the play.

For me the play was good but it´s got small things to improve. Keep on work!  

 Our play: "The Time machine":

 Afeter seing the play we created a new one.Enjoy.

                                                      NOTICE:

We are inventing a machine to travel to the past but we don’t have assistants and we need personal with:

-15 years old

-a woman and a man

- Great students

Nick and Laurie see the notice about the project and he says :

-Yes, it’s a great idea! But are we great students?

-Obviously.Let’s go to the profesor’s lab .

-Are you looking for me? Well here I am.

-Now what are we going to do?

-Lest's travel to the past, to see the dinosaurs and bring an egg to the present

-I think it’s a terrible idea. It’s dangerous!  

Nick, Laurie and the Professor go to the lab:

After finishing the time machine, the professor goes to dinner .In this time Nick and Laurie travel to the past to search a dinosaur´s egg.

-Yes, we are with the dinosaurs!!

Meanwhile in the present the professor comes back of his dinner.

Nick !Laurie! Where are you? Oh no they went to the past.

-Laurie here we have an egg biggest than you.

-Pick it now and then go.

When they  are in the present ,the egg is opened and the dinosaur goes out.

What are you doing?!?!

We brought an egg of dinosaur.

Oh no it’s terrible,it is the end of the humanity!

It doesn’t matter, everything is ok.

2 days later the dinosaur is bigger and he eats a lot of people in world.

MORAL: do not change the past if you are happy with the present. It could be dangerous!

And now a video of  the play: